Yeah... An experience no like tasting
deliciousness neither seeing extravagant beauty nor touching heaven with my hands... It
eradicates the worries of the day and kindles joy in my heart. Her voice soothingly
expressed morning greetings, like the flow of a smooth water fall into the
rivers of my veins… As close as her
voice is over the phone, I wish her lips murmured it into my ears to feel her
breath brush my cheek, wrapping me up in softness of her words…
She offers me the chance to be lazy full of fun, allowing me to fake my helplessness that puzzles her mind. That’s when her motherly instinct shows up to me, acting like mummy towards her babe... She loves it when she scolds her naughty boy for whatever. She will just give it a name and rebuke him for it...
She wonders anticipating my every thought… She's captivated in words that irritate her
curiosity, growing her restlessness and steering butterflies of anxiety in her stomach, shaking her inside out. Even my silence provokes her, drives her out of sanity, though I never meant it.
That's just a snippet of how she is and how we are...
Andy.
Well done on a hearfelt piece. It's a very wholesome relationship that shows the varying levels of love and closeness between this couple.
ReplyDeleteVery well written! i loved it!
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful piece, full of emotions and description that helped me visualize it as if it is happening right in front of me. I like the transition between paragraphs and the way you describe her as if she is a goddess or maybe a love from the first sight. The words are deep and sound real.
ReplyDeleteRead it and was SPEECHLESS! Adored the "hidden" aspect behind the character which puts all the emphasis on fully experiencing the story told...made me travel through every word and felt like transitioning from one beautiful scene to another :)
ReplyDeleteIn sum...I LOVE IT